This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.
These are some of my favourite sentences from my writing this week
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH the ball goes into the soccer goal. The crowd went wild YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY The crowd is shouting loud like someone pulling the trigger on a gun.
Hi Lucas
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your sentences. Your simile helped me imagine how loud the crowd must have been at that moment. Remember to add a post title to your blog posts. You could call this post 'Language Features' or 'Writing'.
From Miss Fortes