Stop Go Animation station

Hello blogging world can you give me feedback for this video.  So you watch the video then you give me feedback so I can make the video better.

One thing i was thinking is why does it always take only 5 or 6 seconds to watch the video when it takes us 10 minutes to make it?

Thank you

Using my senses to describe an object

Kia orana blog world
I have been learning to use my senses to describe an object.This is a video of my work. Please give me feed back.
me reading my work

WALA Drums

Today I was happy because there were a lot of drums on the stage.  The Drums came from Ghana. The performance was amazing because the drums were fantastic and made me feel like I was flying.