This week I have been using a range of language features to help make my writing more descriptive. Some language features we have been talking about are similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia.

These are some of my favourite sentences from my writing this week

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH the ball goes into the soccer goal. The crowd went wild YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY The crowd is shouting loud like someone pulling the trigger on a gun.